I don't know if anyone here is on redvee.net and seen the shirt im going to get made. I did have one made last season and it went down a treat with the people who bought them.

I have slightly altered a few things to get round the copyright. The stickman is slightly changed and the 'St. Helens Glass' is still a registered company, so I replaced Glass with Class. Some people think thats tacky and cheap but I don't think it does at all. I have added redvee.net or superleaguefans.com but im still waiting to see if I can use them on the shirt. If not then they will be removed

I'm gonna offer some (hopefully) constructive criticism and hope I don't come across as a bitchy/whinging c***...

I love the idea behind this, however, compared to the shirt you did last year I think this scores low. The original (as seen rlhererl for those who don't remember it) looks so good because of its simplicity. This new imagining of the design is a bit 'busy' and your badges and the sponsor text are very much out of proportion (i.e. too big).

Personally I would make it a bit 'cleaner' and more retro looking by a) losing the white bits from the shoulders etc, b) making the St.Helens Class logo smaller and more compact, c) making the two website logos much smaller and putting them on the bottom of the sleeves and d) putting the town crest on the neck and ditching the supporters crest you created (which I can't find it in me to like, sorry).

But then it's your design and project to do with as you will and clearly people like it so I'll shut up now.