Quote: mcmickeycas "it seems that wakie moan about anything then rather own club focusing on cas it bang out of order to say stuff about richard wright when he has not even objected to new market'"
1. No punctuation what so ever.
2. No capital letters on names/place names.
"then" used instead of "than".
3. Opening "sentence" (if you can call it that, as it's totally unpunctuated it's hard to differentiate between different sentences- it's essentially 2 points pushed together without connectives or punctuation)
"it seems that wakie moan about anything then rather own club focusing on cas it bang out of order" makes no sense what so ever.
4.
"new market" is all one word & correctly presented as "Newmarket" (notice the capital letter)
Level 2c- year 3- aged 7-8
If it wasn't for the phrase
"it bang out of order" I'd be sure that came from a 7 year old!
Put it this way chum, don't go on "[iAre you smarter than a 10 year old?[/i"
(10 min writing assessment in my break!)
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